Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: September 04, 2012 09:31 EDT Comment/Review: Looks like it didn't upload right and needs to be re-formatted. There is no paragraph separation - making it very difficult to read.
Reviewed By:WetDogNose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2012 03:33 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This is some good stuff here. Some grammar mistakes throughout but nothing a beta reader couldn't fix. Overall a very fun and sexy fic and I really look forward to seeing more work from you. I'm excited to see a new author come into my favorite universe here. Keep up the good work! Wetdognose