| "You are just like snow." Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: impulse960 On: December 23, 2012 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That whole chapter in one big paragraph makes this really hard to read. But it doesn't hide the glaring spelling mistakes. You claim to be a writer in your profile, have some pride and use spell check or get a beta reader. This may very well be a really good story but the errors and formatting distract from it. |
Title: your just like snow
Reviewed By: kagome15higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2012 08:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't sress and worry over what poeple think, cuz its just gonna make you sick trust me been there done that and it ain't nive, any whooo it was great i love reading this do more and i carn't wait for the next up date and it dosen't matter what other people think it only matters what you think ok, if you like it then it will be absioutly great ^_^ hope to see another up date *hugs* dont forget about what i said too much stess can make you sick ^_^ hetehehehehe |
Title: ITS AMAZING
Reviewed By: Kagome_15_Higurashi On: December 12, 2012 05:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeease do more i love reading this do more ^_^ im actually a mm member but im not loged in im called kagome15higurashi and im actually thinking of doing a sa=esskag fan fic have you got any ideas for it that i could use please ^_^ Sesshomaru: hummm... another fanfic about this sesshomaru and my kagome Me: maybe wats it to you Sesshomaru: actually its every thing to this Sesshomaru Me: oh really... Oh Kagura *sing song voice* Kagura:Oh Sesshomaru |
Reviewed By: Glily On: December 09, 2012 10:59 EST
Comment/Review:
It's really hard to read your chapters because there is no paragraph structure... ponygirl2112 explained it to you in a review... if you need some beta type help let me know and I will give you my email address. |
Title: You are just like snow
Reviewed By: kagome15higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2012 08:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me agfain and i know how you feel, i had a hard time wr5iting my last chapter because its comming up to my grandads bday and he won't be nere for it and than ive got christ mas to look forward to so totally know how crappy you feel and your the only person im going to tell this to on MM my grandad died christmas morning last year, along with my great grandma and my other grandad earlyer that year and it feels even worse this year, well hope you feel better and carry on writing this awesome fan fic ^_^ cause it makes me feel better and helps me forget my own hardships ^_^ |
Title: You are just like snow
Reviewed By: Kagome_15_Higurashi On: November 14, 2012 08:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter please do more and epic souta has a dirty mind naught naughty lol |
Title: LINE SPACES ARE YOUR FRIEND
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2012 17:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
It is REALLY hard to read stories when it's just 1 huge paragraph with no spacing besides those between words. Speech from each person should be it's own little paragraph. Look at pretty much any entry on here & look at how they space their stories & that's more or less how this should be spaced, line spaces are your friend unless you want to do bad things to your potential readers. |
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please come out with another chapter soon! this is really cool! |
Title: You are just like snow
Reviewed By: kagome-15-higurashi On: October 08, 2012 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am a mediaminner member but im not logged on at the moment please do more i thourally enjoyed reading this ^_^ if you have DA then look up kagome15higurashi ^_^ carn't wait for up date |
Title: its ok
Reviewed By: ilikeurface! On: August 25, 2012 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good, keep up the good work, and watch your spell check. You are a really good writer, show your potential and confidence! KEEP WRITING! |
Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: inubaby127 On: July 24, 2012 00:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read you should write a continuing when inuyasha finds out and in the end kagome goes with sesshomaru keep up the good work |
