| "Suddenly" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would never have guest. Nice job. To think is this is one pairing I don't see although I have seen it implied one.
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Title: Suddenly
Reviewed By: rsbfnrnksdjg On: January 26, 2004 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
this was funny.
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *it wont let me sign in! :( * On: September 03, 2003 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
EWWW!! HAHA!!! I dont know why.. but that twist made me laugh!! HAHA!! ANd I hate Krillin pairings!!!!! Hehee! I was soo tricked! I was expecting him to say Kakarot!!
Good work! |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god, that tricked me. That was very good though... a bit... unusual, but good either eay ^^ -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: Manawolf On: August 27, 2002 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH MY BRAIN!!!!!
Incidentially, the "K--" was ingenious. As far as grammar goes tho, you could use an editor, there are a few goofs (like using a word that is phonetically identical but is spelled and means something different).
It is rather clever; there are so many fics like this, that leave you to assume it IS, uh, who we think it is. Stories of any kind should always make clear, one way or the other, what characters are involved - the name needn't be stated, but there are plenty of other ways to make it perfectly clear. So many don't do this, and you take shameless advantage of that. Mental trauma aside, it was very well done. |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia On: August 18, 2002 15:29 CDT
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Oh my God!! You totally set us up with that one!! I've read a fic like this before, but this time I totally didn't expect it. Nice job. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy craP! O.O That did fool me! It was good either way!. |
Reviewed By: Eeyoresque On: June 02, 2003 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHH! I can't get that image out of my head! I love the part when Vegeta said "K-." You totally had me fooled. You are so bad. :P |
