| "big poem collection thing" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoguht they were really cool! HELLO! EVIE!! Did angst and other fail to atch your eye??????dumbass.......ANYWAYS! totally cool!! :D lol,life is a blow job *snicker* tee hee, Ja! |
Reviewed By: Evie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It starts off funny, but then moves towards the obscene in a way that's not. If you're going for angry in some of these, put them in an anger collection, not a humor collection. |
Reviewed By: Cris On: September 13, 2002 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well its really good, but i think u should try these phases....phase 1 collected underpants.....phase 2................................phase 3 profit.... |
Reviewed By: Pope of the New Logicians On: August 14, 2002 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa... that was insanely funny. "Life" and "Love" particularly - hilarious, and insightful. "happy fun times at school" works better vocally, but the concept is still good. |
