| "Kami's Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sziraface [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2012 23:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked what you had going in the beginning, Kagome seemed tough as nails. No longer tha damsel in distress if you will. What you had going was great but as it progressed I feel like you put her back into the weak can't take care of herself position and it leaves me wondering, well why did she even bother training at all? Now don't take this the wrong way I do want to know what happens just thought you might like to hear one of your readers thoughts. Eagerly awaiting an update and hopefully Kagome being all powerful again. :D |
Title: buzzk97
Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2012 16:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far and I am glad that you updated when you said that you would. Please keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2012 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make it Sesshomaru and inuYasha and Kagome pairing. |
