| "In Need of a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: September 05, 2012 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you tease. How did you know I love limes? |
Reviewed By: SayainInuQueen26 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2012 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait for more!!!! Keep up the good work. This is the only AU that i have enjoyed! ~*Dragon*~ |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2012 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember the story I bet is the one that inspired you to write this one, if wild-Inu was naked and pinned to the ground with Kikyou's arrows through his hands. I'm already liking your version much better, if he's just tied up in a hut with magical rope. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how you handle Kagome being his destined mate and all that fun stuff. Also, I wasn't expecting the Sango and Miroku lemon and honestly thought it was a little out of left field at first, but then the reveal that they already know each other, that was unexpected but also awesome, a fabulous twist. Was the whole thing a plot then, I wonder, if Sango deliberately wanted Kagome to go to the castle? Well probably not if the rumors of this 'crazed youkai' have been floating around for years, but no wonder Sango wanted to go too, then, when Kagome got summoned, if it meant she'd get to see Miroku during the process. A nice little bonus. But Inuyasha and Kagome are definitely the stars of this story and so like I said, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Good job! :-) |
Reviewed By: Star555555528(nsi) On: August 20, 2012 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very good story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work and remember people are reading even if they don't leave you comments and we all appreciate your writing! |
Reviewed By: SayainInuQueen26 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2012 19:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
keep up the good work!! ~*Dragon*~ |
Reviewed By: kazanova [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2012 23:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm loving the idea, and the start to this story. I'm excited to see how it progresses. :) Don't be scared to go into detail with your stories, it'll definitely help to set the mood and get everyone locked into the "zone". |
Reviewed By: SayainInuQueen26 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2012 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait til i see more. MORE MORE!!!!! ~*Dragon*~ |
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