| "In Need of a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: March 30, 2013 01:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
Holy hell, is it Kikyo?! I want to know what happened between her and Inuyasha. I hope our less fluffy puppy doesn't want Kikyo. want |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2013 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! So glad you updated again, and promised to never ultimately leave it unfinished. I can wait between updates so long as you swear you'll eventually update. I'm so glad 'phase one' is over, so to speak, LOL. Now comes all the fun drama of them being mated and also having to deal with the jewel. Yay! |
Reviewed By: Do you know the muffin man On: January 28, 2013 17:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story I can't wait for more!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: SayainInuQueen26 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2013 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
love it |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2012 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wasn't expecting Inuyasha to still be full youkai, and apparently neither was Kagome, LOL, but that was a nice twist. Good thing the others showed up, I guess, though maybe if he hadn't been distracted he would've done the blood bond thingie anyway. Either way, glad he did the bond thing to save her life. I guess night after night of being tied up crazy for a mate and then finding his mate made him a little too eager, LOL. Loved that tease that his eyes flashed to gold before she passed out. Now comes the 'morning after' scene with a normal Inu, yes? Well whatever you do next, I'm super looking forward to it! |
Title: LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN FATE OF HANYOU!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lexicon On: December 07, 2012 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! |
Title: LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN THE ORIGINAL
Reviewed By: Lexicon On: December 07, 2012 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story especially since I adored Fate of a Hanyou so much, please continue to post chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: katie2.0 On: December 01, 2012 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story can't wait for more chapters!!!! :-) |
Reviewed By: SayainInuQueen26 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2012 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No going back now. Does this mean we'll finally get to see regular ol' hanyou Inuyasha? Wonder what his reaction to all the happenings is going to be. I can understand why Sesshoumaru wanted to wait until Inuyasha could be his hanyou self to get to know Kagome, but too late now. He wasn't doing a very good job preventing Inuyasha and Kagome from being together. Perhaps he has ulterior motives and knew it would happen this way all along. If not, then he can berate Inuyasha until he's blue in the face but what's done is done. Super looking forward to the 'morning after' scene - even though it technically already is morning. Update as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2012 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took me a few days to find the time to read this, but I loved this update! Can't wait to see what happens next. *wink* |
Reviewed By: lovelylovelycitrusyfruits On: October 15, 2012 04:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must know what happens!!! Please update soon! This is a really good story, and I want a freaking lemon!!!!! Please and thank you!! |
Title: Update?
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story says completed but it's far from that. Updating soon I hope? |
Reviewed By: illiterateperson On: September 08, 2012 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've certainly caught my attention! I'm loving what you're doing with the story and how you're setting up the characters. Please update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2012 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update. At first I was confused as to why Sesshoumaru was so against Kagome being near Inuyasha, since it's clear she's actually Inuyasha's destined mate, and I thought that maybe Sesshoumaru didn't consider that possibility because she's a miko and maybe he knows the real story involving Kikyou and just doesn't want a repeat of that. But it makes sense if they're worried how normal-Inu as a hanyou will react to Kagome and so they want to wait until his madness is over so that the two of them can actually meet and get to know each other with him as his normal self. Sesshoumaru is probably not acting concerned regarding the possibility that Kagome could get hurt or killed while she's out there on her own because he can sense her and actually knows that she's just fine. But would Inuyasha as a hanyou really not accept Kagome? That's just silly, if she's his destined mate and all. I mean, I'm not criticizing you, I'm criticizing the characters themselves for thinking so little of him, which means I'm getting into the story if I can be made at a character for saying something stupid that you as the author clearly did on purpose. :-) I will say, though, that the apostrophes in lieu of quotation marks are a tiny bit distracting, although I can distinguish between dialog and thoughts because your thoughts are in italic, so I'm glad for that. All in all I'm really enjoying this so far and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. |
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