| "Seeing Each Other 500 Years Into The Future" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: kittycat576764 On: January 06, 2015 00:05 EST
Comment/Review:
So good wish u would continue.
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Title: ghostwriter32
Reviewed By: fanficlver On: December 20, 2012 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the writing! I can tell you are inexperienced but practice dose make perfect. I would have liked to have seen some more development of the characters nature in the story, don't rely too heavily on what people already know from the anime/Magna... you have to make them come to life yourself as well. Watch the grammar but other than that great job.:) |
Title: love it
Reviewed By: kagome248687 On: November 27, 2012 08:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it ... can't wait to ready pt2 |
Reviewed By: nikichan On: September 25, 2012 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Keep going. Bye! |
