| "Spirit Cords" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Title: Mmm.
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2013 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffhanger. I loved it. Write moar. Stay sexy. |
Title: makes the world go round
Reviewed By: Lovelovelovelalalove... On: April 10, 2013 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always you are flawless. I love watching a plot come together. I love how she's just like, dude in black. Not like, OMG DUDE IN BLACK WAWAWHFPOHG{HG *keysmash* LOVE. ALL THE LOVE. |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Nepheara On: April 09, 2013 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel like this was just a little bit fast as far as the transition goes but totally worth it. Very well written and it made me just wanna keep reading more! I can not wait for the next chapter! |
Title: sometimes i realize i use the wrong your and i give no fs
Reviewed By: Youretotesawesome On: April 02, 2013 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's another one for chapter 5. i really like that one and i don't know why specifically but it might be my favorite. |
Title: see nickname
Reviewed By: YourAwesome On: April 02, 2013 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're awesome. TOTES AWESOME BRA. DO NOT CHANGE. EVER. |
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2013 20:42 EST
Comment/Review:
Mmm mooar. The kids are so cute, lol. I don't have any complaints |
Title: It's Britney bitch
Reviewed By: Slayer of Bitches On: February 11, 2013 22:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best chapter yet! The description of how she mimicked Yusuke's voice was my favorite part. I also thoroughly enjoyed Kuwabara's gay joke and his mention of the tickle feeling. |
Reviewed By: Nepheara On: February 11, 2013 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always! I can't wait to read more! |
Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2013 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:c Sadly I wish there were more since I read some of what you had in class that one day. :c Soooooooooooo... c: I loved this chapter. Write more. Can't wait to see how the kareoke place goes. |
Reviewed By: Kayleeeeeeeeeee On: January 01, 2013 20:48 EST
Comment/Review:
I love your OC. She's adorable and the voice in this makes me giggle. Keiko is pretty much perfect. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Tadpole Jackson On: December 18, 2012 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how incredibly in character everyone was. Yusukes lines were especially perfect. The description of the dog attack gave me chills too. |
Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Nepheara On: December 18, 2012 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful! Totally worth the wait. They were perfectly in character and the humor at the end was a perfect ending! The bit of back ground for your OC was also well written I enjoyed the visualization and the "jumping" in order to tell her story. Very well written! I can not wait to read more!! |
Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: CooKooClock On: October 24, 2012 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah this is awesome, cant wait for more! |
Title: RIP Jon Pierre
Reviewed By: Margarita [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2012 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved the way you described the reaction she had to Kurama. That scene specifically just stood out. The whole thing was extremely well written. I already feel like I know all those little abnoxish children super well. Plus I'm hungry now from your description of all that delcious japanese food. All of the canon characters interactions were super in character and the sarcasm was perfect. (I can't wait until Botan shows up because you'll have a field day with her.) |
Title: Wunderbar
Reviewed By: Visitor On: October 10, 2012 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're lovely, hun. Keep writing more. I know it will be fantastic. |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: LustfulCrimsonSin13 On: October 10, 2012 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very creative and interesting story line so far. The writing, I feel, has been super and I simply can not wait for more. The main character has a real personality that shows through with the writing, and a relatable attitude. It is well structures and well written, an over all success! Keep it up! ~LustfulCrmsonSin13 |
Title: Mmm
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2012 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious. Write more soon. |
