| "Kagome's Choice & Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: i love the story
Reviewed By: princessUsagiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2013 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I injoy this story plz do more and I hope nd a picture of wa kagome look like and when my fanfiction comes up on it will be called kagome is possessed its about naraku possessing kagome and after that story it will be about kagome turns into a full demon like sesshomaru and inuyasha finds out that kagome's brother is sesahomaru :D |
Title: Re: Vampitty
Reviewed By: fanficlover1369 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 21:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for letting me know that my chapters 5 and 6 were the same. I have fixed that I hope you find the story is moving along better with the fix. Thanks again for letting me know. |
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 16:47 EST
Comment/Review:
um, just letting you know chapter 5 & 6 are the same chapter.... :( |
Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2012 22:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
Im really enjoying the story line so far, don't leave us hanging on some details of whats going on...good luck with ur school wrk ;] |
Title: Please write more
Reviewed By: Awesome jjddf On: October 30, 2012 23:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying the story...please keep up the good work :) |
Reviewed By: fanfiction-addiction On: October 19, 2012 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a really good story so far! I can't wait to read more! I would have liked more details about how Kagome got hurt, and there's a bit of kinks in the grammar, but this story is really good! please don't take too long to put more up! I might just go crazy =P thank you for the good read! =D |
