| "Of Fangs and Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2013 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME! I really liked how everything worked out. I'm thinking that next you should make the trilogy complete by writing a chapter with Inuyasha proposing to Kagome...I saw how you slid that in there, but did not follow through, you sneaky little vixen😜...hehehe. It would also be nice to see how Rin and Sesh end up with their relationship. Keep up the incredible work and I can wait for you next story to be finished...many hugs😉!!! |
Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: November 05, 2012 04:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And they all lived happily ever after! Happy Halloween! Real question is what are you going to write next year???? lolz! Cute story!!! |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2012 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I too wish for another sequel ^.^ ... Maybe even a chapter story... And... Can vampires have children ^.^ just a thought... |
Reviewed By: jimmychimmy On: November 01, 2012 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only put an "8" for originality because I've seen the "Kagome and Inuyasha are vampires" story before. However, I did thoroughly enjoy the story. You keep the characters in character (wow that sounds redundant XD) and the story does seem believable. I'm wondering if you will do a sequel to this story where Rin will get turned? It would be really cool if you did. |
