Reviewed By: YummyYummyCitrus-yFruits On: November 09, 2012 14:04 EST Comment/Review: okay, so I love the start of this fanfic. I can't wait to read more. I have issues with certain things about it, but it's nothing I can't live with. Those being that Kagome was gone for 10 years (seems ridiculous to me) and that InuYasha mated a dead woman who doesn't possess the capability of bearing children. But ya. I still love where this is going! And I think that Kagome should have just kept Kilala with her, I mean, when was the last time that Kilala really got to go anywhere and do anything? Sango has kids now! I'm rambling. Good job! Keep it up! =D |