| "Forgotten Heritage" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2013 22:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Some of the sentences have been a little hard to understand but the overall story is good. Wonder what they want with Vegeta and are they really Saiyans? Hopefully now Goku is entering the story, he can find Vegeta and get some answers. |
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2012 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start, is Vegeta the orphan? |
