| "Incentives" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: the greatest
Reviewed By: Blessed_love On: July 21, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome blossom. Cool to the max. Diddo to all of the great things other people said, I agree entirely. Tubular~!
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Reviewed By: Lisha Lane On: June 03, 2005 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very very good! Poor Yuki. P.S. What is a lime story?
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Reviewed By: Hiro no Tenchi On: September 04, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ina-chan! Great job! I really enjoyed this fic, and I hope that you will consider writing another lemon eventually because you are really good at it. In all honesty, I liked your use of "flowery" language--I prefer it over the use of technical terms because it makes everything a little more "dreamy" and "romantic". (I'm a complete sucker for romance!) What else? Oh, there were a few spelling/grammar errors, but other than that, your fic was emmensely enjoyable. Yuki was perfectly in character, and Tohru was for the most part as well (I found her to be a little too bold here and there, but if it's not her first time, perhaps that is to be expected). Anyway, awesome job! I will definately look into reading some of your other Furuba fics now that I've read this one. :)
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: R Junkie On: March 07, 2004 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints* I can't belive you were hiding this...this masterpiece of literary yummy yummy from me!!! I could've never known about this and then where would I be then? If this was your 'attempt' at a lemon then..GAH! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WOMAN??? WRITE YUKIRU IN EVERY SWEATY CENSOR CENSOR CENSOR WAY! Ahem...I love it! It was really great. ^_^
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Abby T On: February 16, 2004 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fan fiction was amazing. Good use of vocabulary and you kept the character's personality right on the ball. I gave you an 8 for originality/creativity because, like the other person said, it's a lemon and they are everywhere...but you did add some disabilities to Yuki and I thought that was creative, sorta err... but anyways, very good I enjoyed it a lot.
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Reviewed By: lola [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good stories ^-^ never thought what happened to yuki could be a positive thing, so that was an interesting thing to have. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Stabber On: September 19, 2002 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you get a 5 for origonality because ... well ... its a lemon!!!! THEY'RE EVERYWHERE!!!
Anywho, I admire your style of writing very much. You are my current favorite in the fanfic department. Keep it up, and beware of bets. |
