| "Good Advice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Love Blossoms
Reviewed By: KagomesDarkHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2013 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love Blossoms in odd way's and you show this in this work of art you have posted. I do hope there is more to come but if not the last chapter was a good way to end as well. |
Title: Marvelous! Please continue
Reviewed By: HarlequinHawk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2013 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. Where do I begin? First, this story MUST keep going I thoroughly enjoyed it. You kept the characters almost completely in time with how they are in the anime/manga and that's wonderful. I love that instead of being a flat character you changed Sesshoumaru into a dynamic character and made him vulnerable- therefore explaining his behavior. And way to keep Kagome's sense of self pride and self-preservation in tact. All in all this was a wonderful story. I'm sad there's not another chapter for me to read. I couldn't help but giggle and squeal during some parts. Pleeease! Continue this story or write a sequel no matter what! I don't normally write reviews so I really must've been impressed ;D Take care and thank you for the marvelous piece of writing. -Harlequin |
Reviewed By: Reader in Disguise On: January 23, 2013 03:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, what a difference a day makes! Sesshomaru is working hard at it and it shows! Good for him! I hope this really helps him to build ladders to climb those walls that Kagome build to keep him away! Please update soon again! |
Reviewed By: Reader in Disguise On: January 20, 2013 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this story is delightful! I am loving each and every moment and I am tickled pink that you decided to write this! +++ Sesshomaru seems to be having an awful time, but perhaps he too will learn to appreciate the classes and find common ground? We could only hope! LOL! Looking forward to the next chapter, so please update soon! |
