| "The Devil Within" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Bronzelover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2013 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good so far!! I like it very much!!! Please update I want to read more! |
Reviewed By: DBFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2013 01:29 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm dying to read more of this story! I've been waiting on you're other b/v story on fanfiction as well! |
Reviewed By: Rogue's masquerade On: March 03, 2013 23:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Please keep going! I always hate to see an amazing set up to a possibly great story just stop... |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2013 13:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you're story is really interesting. As far as the nightmares I've seen other stories with this but I think you have a great style of writing and now I need to know what happens next! lol |
Reviewed By: Ellee On: February 06, 2013 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 1 review: ouch. that had to hurt. I guess we will see Vegeta's reaction to all this, once Bulma is in the hospital. |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: January 29, 2013 13:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Great prologue and first chapter! It will be interesting to see how Vegeta lets Bulma help him with these nightmares. Nice work! |
