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| "Rage and Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: WetDogNose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2013 07:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sure Inuyasha and Kagome both enjoy a little hand-to-hand 'combat' every now and then when tempers flare. Really liked the idea behind this one, and if you are feeling up to it, SplendentGoddess' idea below would make for a great follow-up. Either way, I enjoyed this story and keep up the good work! | Reviewed By: Graidon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2013 11:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I enjoyed it very much. Just wish it was a little longer, but for the premise it was good. | Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2013 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know the artwork this is based on, and I think it was a neat development from that piece. Keep on writing! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2013 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the concept, and a food shortage is definitely a good enough reason to get them both super cranky. You're right that just about any couple has the occasional fight, and boy howdy, did those two used to have some wicked good fights, LOL. The idea of getting at each other's throats and then collapsing into angry sex is a good one, I just wish the lemon had a little more oomph. He basically just kinda-sorta rapes her - except it's not really rape of course and I had no problem with that aspect - and then she (reluctantly) gets into it. I don't mind that beginning, but I'd like to have seen her turn the tables after he rested, using the rosary after all to pin him down and then have her own way with him or something. I just think the angry sex was a little one-sided; it was Inuyasha's angry sex, which was good, but I also want to see Kagome's angry sex, 'cause I bet that bitch could make him submit if he got her pissed enough, LOL. Do like the concept though, so all in all good job, 'cause most people have their lives all butterflies and rainbows post-manga and I'm positive they'd have the occasional screaming match. |
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