| "Wiring" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: DBLove On: September 19, 2013 12:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Um I've been waiting for an update! Will this story be updated!? :( |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2013 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! |
Reviewed By: DBFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2013 14:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I think you're doing a great job of keepin them in character. It's extremely close to how I pictured they'd be in the anime when they got together. & There's no rush for the juicy stuff. Take your time to develop the characters & their feelings. Can't wait for the next chap! |
Reviewed By: DBFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2013 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another chapter! Yamcha annoys the hell outta me -_- He always has, even in the anime! I wish he'd get over himself & grow some balls! Lol anyway I love bulma & vegeta interactions. Hope to see a lot more of that! Great chapter & can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: DBFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2013 03:19 EDT
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Wow this is really good! I love it so far. I'm curious as to how you have their relationship develop. I hope it's not quick & messy like I've read in other stories. But like I said I'm really impressed so far. I hope you update soon! |
Title: Great start!
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2013 14:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is great so far! You are doing an amazing job! If advise you to post this on fanficiton though, I think you'd have a lot more exposure on that website and a tonne more feedback. |
