| "You've Got a Hold On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2013 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am IN LOVE with this chapter. seriously. I love how you're dealing with Vegeta's character |
Reviewed By: nynalia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2013 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, I really like this! So very much! I loved the slowly growing tension that you created between the two. I also really liked the idea of having vegeta slip up and call bulma beautiful in saiyago. Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2013 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah-mazing chapter! |
Reviewed By: nynalia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2013 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, absolutely delicious! I really like your writing style. The descriptive flow is great and I think you did a really great job of keeping them in character. Thanks for updating so quickly too! |
Reviewed By: nynalia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2013 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey really like the fic so far! I like your writing style and I'm excited to see a new b/ v author out there! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DBFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2013 17:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Everything about this story is amazing so far! Please update soon! I'll be waiting |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2013 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so excited about this story! can't wait for the next chapter. |
