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| "The Heart in My Hand" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: semexx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2013 07:27 EDT
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Jealous lot? I wonder what became of the wife... . It was unexpected, but makes me somewhat hopeful that Ulquiorra is able of deeper emotions. Why should his Hollow name not be his former human name? I mean how else could Aizen possibly find out about Ulquiorra's human life? Unless of course he looks similiar to his former human form. Thanks for the update :) | Reviewed By: semexx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2013 06:54 EDT
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Oh, man I can see it coming--the love triangle. Now that Orihime can't have Ichigo she'll most likely go after Ulquiorra... . After all there was some tension between the two. Did Ichigo break up with her because of he likes guys? It would make sense, but it's kind of pathetic that Orihime is dating Kon now. About not reading the manga, that can't be right, afterall you wrote that Ichigo was part Quincy and this is only revealed in the manga. It was interesting to read from Ulquiorra's pov, I just hope there won't be any further clones :) | Reviewed By: semexx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2013 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very interesting. I love the hotness and the differences between Ichigo and Ulquiorra. Your writing style is good and I didn't detect many grammatical errors. It was fun to read and the pace of the story is perfect. Not to fast nor to slow. I hope it's going to be a looong story ><
That Ulquiorra would be after Ichigo's soul was a pleasant surprise. After all in the series he never shows any interest in eating souls. Also that he is a clone, that surprise was less pleasant. I was so sad about the originals demise... Well done and thanks for the story :D |
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