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Reviewed By: SilentAltiair On: August 04, 2013 04:56 EDT
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Another great chapter done by you. You diffently made an interesting character and future rival in Troy. Can't wait to see how you write Sara and him when they are older. Even though this is a Thunderhawk x OC story I hope you don't make it too obvious who Sara is going to pick, by that I mean making Troy into the biggest prick ever, but the way its going so far that doesn't seem likely, so another point for you. Another point is that your just writing Sara and Troy to be just what they are... kids. I hate reading a story with children in it and they act like the adults... that just doesn't happen. Hope to see more from you.

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