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| "Frozen" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Game47 On: February 24, 2004 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You probably do not even see this anymore so I'll feel ok writing in this spot. It is 2 years old right? Well right now it's 11:52 pm (2/23/04) and I have no idea how I ended up here. I google searched it and it came up. Sad that it took so many years to read it, I never even saw that I was referenced in some of your writing. The story was great, and right now emotionally, it really got me down. Never really realized how cruel I was, and even though things are changed, I will apologize. I am glad you won't be reading this, because I don't want you to see it. I wrote this to find a peace for me, that's it. If only you knew the design that went in to specifically hurting you, and how it wasn't all me. I could have fixed everything in the times of trouble by saying a sentence, but that would mean I would have stabbed those that stabbed me, and I am not one of them. Again, sorry.
| Reviewed By: ringer-chan On: July 25, 2003 02:50 CDT
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I love ur tory u should continue even if some of these dumb ppl won't review u atleast3 of us care great story. | Reviewed By: lil rach On: April 12, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy like ur story! i love b/v fics! i want to see what happens its a great story so keep writing. but it gets kind of confusing when theres a whl conversation n one whole paragraph. but its still really good! can't wait till the next chapters! :) | Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 20:55 CDT
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plz write soon id like to read more!! |
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