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| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ses8535 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2013 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, and I hope you do continue. Your writing is very well done and I think this story could be very interesting to read. | Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2013 00:43 EDT
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This is quite interesting, even though the first chapter is rather short - which is a good thing! I like the voice you've presented in this, and I like Bulma's perspective. It's also an interesting take on the whole 'Frieza invades Earth' scenario, which hasn't been done OVERLY much and I think still needs more attention. So far I like the intro you have here. Your narrative is very attention-grabbing! ^_^ Really liked this, and I hope you continue to update! I am definitely interested to see how you go about getting the couple together, considering (as you so nicely put it) Vegeta is coming from an organization/empire that produces sociopaths! Brilliant! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Rogue's masquerade On: August 02, 2013 04:03 EDT
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Not a bad start! I'll be watching to see where it goes! |
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