| "Revenge: An Earthling's Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Vbprl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2016 23:54 PDT
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Bulma was a very dangerous woman in this story. Very different from
what I've read.
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Reviewed By: nancy103 On: October 28, 2013 08:02 PDT
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Nice chapter! So Vegeta is going to take a lesson from Bulma's playbook. Nice twist! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: September 28, 2013 20:51 PDT
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What a cliffhanger!! Update soon - very exciting! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: September 24, 2013 10:42 PDT
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I really didn't see Kakarot having those feeling for Bulma. It certainly does create "complications" and yes, the outcome may not be good. Thanks for updating so quickly!! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: September 19, 2013 18:07 PDT
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Great turn of events in this chapter! Bulma is a bitch in this story but after what she has been through, it is fitting. Great story so far! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: September 14, 2013 22:05 PDT
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Excellent first chapter! Definitely a side of Bulma we do not see too often. Looking forward to reading the rest! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade76 On: September 10, 2013 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Great first chapter! Seriously, you should post this on FFN. I'm gonna post this fic as a recommendation on a community called We're Just Saiyan. It's a B/v community. You check it out. The single spacing made the chapter difficult to read, but other than that, great job! |
Reviewed By: BV On: September 05, 2013 07:37 PDT
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Update soon! |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2013 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story so far |
