Reviewed By: Weazul-chan On: February 11, 2004 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, there's not mutch to judge yet, so I have to rank it low. there's a lot of potential for this to turn into an annoying Mary Sue/Marty Stu fanfic, so watch out. a small suggestion tho, you may want to change some of the names of the kids, the setting for Mononoke Hime isn't the kid of setting where you'd find kids with names like Peter and Ann and such. again, I can't really judge based on what little you have up yet, it could go either way.
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