| "Purity 10: Anomaly" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: My heart!
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2020 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All of it broke me, made me hurt for Maddy and ache for
Mikio—grieve for Jazz who deserved so much better than she got, but
this...this part was my absolute favorite. This part gave me a
bittersweet smile and a warm fuzzy feeling. “It’s . . . It’s okay .
. . I went and found you, right? So, you’re not . . . not a bother
to me.” “W-Why?” she stuttered, sniffling as she leaned away, as
her gaze finally met his, her tears still slipping down her face.
He sighed, carefully, a little clumsily, wiping her cheeks with his
fingertips as he managed a half-hearted smile that was almost
contrite. “Because,” he told her with a helpless shrug, and maybe
that spoke volumes, too. “You . . . You needed me.” She blinked,
stared at him for another long moment, and then, she sighed, too,
and let her temple fall against his chest once more, her breathing,
still stunted and stuttering, but her aura felt a little more
peaceful than it had since he’d found her. She said nothing more,
but she didn’t have to, and neither did he. The silence that grew
was soothing, welcome, even if the two of them were separated by
the unvoiced thoughts in their own heads.
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Reviewed By: CarmMeldoll [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2020 09:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heartbreaking, emotional, and beautiful. Sometimes you just need
someone to lean on when times are the hardest. Thanks for another
heartfelt chapter Sue. xoxoxoxox
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2020 06:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Sue. I left a review for the last chapter but under the
comments section so idk if you saw it. Thanks for this chapter. It
was a real emotional one but a huge step forward for Mikio I can’t
wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Soragirl On: May 07, 2020 17:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh Sue you have me crying! What a beautiful and horrible chapter!
Your writing is amazing!
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Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2020 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting that when Mikio isn't focused on his ailments they
aren't really an issue. Psychosomatic? Guess we'll wait and see!
Thanks for the super sad and very interesting chapter!
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Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2020 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting that when Mikio isn't focused on his ailments they
aren't really an issue. Psychosomatic? Guess we'll wait and see!
Thanks for the super sad and very interesting chapter!
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Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2020 10:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting that when Mikio isn't focused on his ailments they
aren't really an issue. Psychosomatic? Guess we'll wait and see!
Thanks for the super sad and very interesting chapter!
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Reviewed By: CarmMeldoll [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2020 05:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a heart-wrenching chapter...poor Jazz, poor Maddy. All of it
so unfair, and yet, so on point how uncaring some people can be.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2020 04:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am so glad you are updating again. I love your stories and have
been with you since purity. I was afraid number 10 wouldn’t be
finished but I’m so glad you are back at it. Your stories have got
me through some tough times throughout the years and I truly love
everything about them. Thank you for writing them and I can’t wait
to see what’s next for Mikio and Madison.
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Reviewed By: CarmMeldoll [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2020 05:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With the status of the country in pandemic crisis Sue you came
through with two awesome chapters in one month! thank you so much.
I really love this story!
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Reviewed By: Sora On: March 30, 2020 22:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter Sue! Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Best wishes to your sick friend as well!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2020 18:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much Sue it means a lot to me truly!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2020 22:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Sue it’s been awhile. Thank you for this chapter. I adore Mikio
and am anxious to read the entirety of his story. I needed it to. I
was diagnosed with the virus and it’s been a rough couple weeks.
This was a light in my day and I hope the story will come off
hiatus so I can read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Sora On: March 27, 2020 17:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter Sue! Mikio and Maddy are so cute! I love
the baby name you picked! Thanks for the chapter, your writing
always brightens my day!
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Reviewed By: Sal On: March 27, 2020 16:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for posting! I think this is quickly becoming my favorite of
your stories. I've been a reader of your work since Purity 2 and
I've reread them so many times (currently almost finished with a
rerun of P4). I think Mikio is absolutely adorable and I'm torn
between wanting him to find relief from his symptoms to thinking
he's perfect the way he is and that he isn't "broken" and therefore
doesn't need to be "fixed". Can't wait to see what you have instore
for him.
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