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Reviewed By: BringingYaoiBack [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2015 17:30 PDT
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I'm sure this is a problem with the file itself and not your doing, but paragraph breaks would be nice. I had similar problems with uploading, so it's forgivable. One other tiny criticism is in the very beginning: first Goten jumps into Trunks' lap, then he's suddenly on the couch next to him, then he teleports into kneeling in front of Trunks? Other than that, it was a cute story. Nice job!

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