Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2013 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was iffy at first but then once I realized Kagome was into it I threw caution to the wind much like Inuyasha did. A part of me actually wants to see a sequel to this, LOL, since he's going to have to confess to being hanyou at some point. It's a full moon, right? That means in two weeks it's a new moon. How's she going to react to his human night? I could see her turning the tables and dominating him for a change. I realize this is just a PWP and I'm sure you had no intention of expanding the story, so don't mind me, LOL. But just think about it. I'm not asking for a serious story to come from this. A sequel could also just be a PWP, just a new moon one-shot where Kagome gets quite the surprise, ya know, if he waited until that night to spill the secret, and then she makes him 'pay' for keeping the secret, LOL. Just let the idea roll around in your head, but you do whatever you want either way. Either way I liked this one. :-) |
