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| "Not Your Typical Blanket" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: lilmercgirl1980 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2014 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! LOL i can totally see Miroku in this lol
| Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2013 01:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was hilarious! ;-) Thank you so much for writing this little escapade. My favorite line, 'That lucky little shit...' I feel so sorry for Inuyasha in this tale, but the brief interaction between Kag/Inu was also so sweet and very believable. And having poor Inu in the same sleeping bag with Miroku, knowing that there were two naked women in the sleeping bag near them. So funny... If you were at all inclined for a sequel, it might be nice to have Inuyasha finally get the blanket scenario that he would want. It might be fun to have Inuyasha waking up and being warmed up by a naked Kagome with his head exactly where Shippo had been... Hee hee... | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2013 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, definitely laughing. So glad to see something new from you! You definitely need to keep it up! :-) |
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