Reviewed By: MadPsyence On: September 25, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story tends to thrust key points into your face over and over..It doesn't have any twists and no foreshadowing to speak of. It doesn't give you a chance to come to any conclusions of your own.
The punctuation is pretty bad. It could use some work. |
