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| "The Ghosts of Suicide Forest" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2014 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, from start to finish. It's so rare to see an adventure
where Kagome gets into and out of trouble without Inuyasha's help.
She was completely in character throughout - not Wonder Woman, but
not a normal teenage girl either. The shit the evil ghosts were
pulling would have spooked anybody. I can't help but wonder what
would have happened to Inuyasha if he'd been there, either with
Kagome or by himself. He probably would have been very strongly
affected by the ghosts, given his past, which I think was part of
the reason you left him out. This was a Kagome story, which again
is refreshing to see. Loved the ending as well. Some romance, but
not too much. Inuyasha actually said something heartfelt without
being OOC for that point in the story. Mrs. H was completely
believable as well. I think that's about all I wanted to say. You
mentioned 'Tommyknockers' in the A/N before the story, and this one
is right up there with that one in terms of enjoyment factor.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2014 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it... I loved how in depth it was... I would also like to
see a sequel to this... Where they go back and purify the rest of
the spirits there... Great job again :)
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