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| "Sailor Moon Shippuden GT: Grand Tour" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2015 01:09 EST
Comment/Review:
I like this story as a whole but you never expanded on Sakura's
connection with the Pretty Cure or showed the corruption scenes
with most of the Sailor Senshi involving the Black Crystal. Also
you didn't show a flashback concerning Kari's last incarnation
being cursed with that love spell and attaching herself to Davis'
last incarnation. I've been following this story the whole time.
| Reviewed By: Ryan L. Spradling On: January 30, 2015 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're still missing the lemon scene that got Serena and most of
the Scouts pregnant.
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2014 14:39 EST
Comment/Review:
I like this story, though, you didn't put Matt's thoughts about
TK's death, I would be believing that he would be seething pissed
off that he wasn't the one that slaughter Kayaba Akihiro himself
for the death of his younger brother. Also, you had Minato beat the
living hell out of Sakura's mother, Mebuki Haruno, is pretty
surprise to say the least. I would have pretty much probably expect
that kind of behavior from Kushina, not from a calm and composed
person like Minato, since I don't think that he's the kind of man
that would strike a woman, no matter how pissed off he may be. I
guess that he may have been with Kushina for far too long or he
must have been ROYALLY REALLY pissed off from the actions that many
of the villagers have done to his son, Naruto. It probably goes to
show you to never underestimate the power of an angry father as
well as an angry mother. Mebuki better be glad that it was only
Minato that pounded her to the ground and had it been Kushina from
I could comprehend her temper would be considering Naruto's own bad
temper and being a mother...let's leave that to your own
imagination. I hope to see more.
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