| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: December 31, 2015 23:39 PST
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha has no obligation to Kikyo. She harmed herself all on her
own to get his attention. I feel sorry for Hojo, but he's too
vanilla. Are you really going to make Kagome inexperienced until
she hooks up with Inuyasha? That's just not fair.
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Reviewed By: Inukaglovewoo On: December 30, 2015 09:33 PST
Comment/Review:
Please please update soon! I ove this fanfic
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Title: Great update!
Reviewed By: imlovinit On: December 09, 2015 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for uploading a new chapter. Though the most recent one got
uploaded twice it doesn't change the fact that this is one of the
best Inuyasha fanfics out there. The plot,drama,sexual tension
& pov's really draw me in. I can't wait for more. Your doing an
awesome job & are truly a great author.
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Title: Great update!
Reviewed By: imlovinit On: December 09, 2015 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for uploading a new chapter. Though the most recent one got
uploaded twice it doesn't change the fact that this is one of the
best Inuyasha fanfics out there. The plot,drama,sexual tension
& pov's really draw me in. I can't wait for more. Your doing an
awesome job & are truly a great author.
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Title: Dang getting me caught up in every chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2015 22:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always do great original plot. Oh my goodness that very plot is
an attention grabber. Thus far you are doing good. About same love
triangle as anime and manga along with a twist to keep readers on
their toes. My only request is more updates more often but I can
always wait if the chapter is good. Inuyasha is getting possessive
over kagome. Seems hojo could get his butt kicked if he hurt
kagome. Please keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, now I'm nervous, and if it is what I think it is, I hope
Kagome hooks up with Seshomaru!!! He's just so yum. And let's face
it, Inuyasha deserves some pain.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha really is disgusting. Did he think Kagome would welcome
him sexually after he had sex with so many women?! Why wasn't his
demon forcing him to be faithful?! I'm sure all the demons in
attendance will smell the whores on Inuyasha. What a way to
disrespect Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love your writing talent, I truly do. But after this little stunt
Inuyasha pulled.......please just please tell me that Kagome will
finally have a couple of one night stands.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
a restraining order on Kikyo is in order. She is just psycho. At
least Inuyasha realized that Kikyo was disrespecting Kagome's home.
I did hate that virgin crack, and I want Kagome to do something
about that, just not with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
Who the hell does Kikyo think she is to show up at Kagome's home?!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 21:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha is unfaithful. I would be okay with that since their
marriage is just an arrangement, except so far Kagome is still a
virgin. I don't want her to give her virginity to that dirty
asshole. I want her to have a boyfriend who cares for her, and
looses it to him. Inuyasha should not be her first.
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Title: love this story
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2015 00:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Started reading when you started this amazing fanfiction. The
characters are well played out in the story. Inuyasha is falling
hard for kagome but not instant love but over time. Getting to know
eachother. Very orginal, please keep up the great work. New chapter
and not making me anxious while waiting.
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Title: finally
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: October 19, 2015 18:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
So glad you updated! Can't wait til nex chapter, scared to know
what happens next!
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Title: Omg love the story
Reviewed By: Ladylove86 On: September 08, 2015 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Alejandra243 On: September 07, 2015 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!!! I was so excited I had two chapters waiting for me. Chapter
...25? Was so amazing to me. I was like, yes this is it! His big
turn around. He's going to see what an amazing person Kagome is and
realize he's been wasting time on those hood rats and start being a
better "husband." Kagome will start to see the change, they fall
madly in love blah blah blah. But then I click next chapter and you
torpedoed all my dreams, haha. That damn dog!!! Ugh! He just can't
keep in his pants! And I have a pretty good feeling Shippo is going
to turn out to be an 8 yr old. So he did all that damage for
nothing! She is too good for him. I don't even care at this point.
I just want her to complete all her dreams. Become a doctor and
take off saving lives. Leave inuyasha in the dust. He deserves it.
I mean I know it's not cheating. I know that. But my heart doesn't!
Keep up the good work! I'm so obsessed with this story.
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