| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: July 03, 2015 21:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
I hope she tells him to go to hell. He was so happy that he would
keep his money and get to have Kikyo bit as soon as Kagome wanted
the same deal he acts like a caveman!!! I am so Kagome/Kouga right
now. If Inuyasha can have sex with Kikyo, and did, in front of
Kagome. She can have sex with Kouga, and she should. Oh please let
her have sex with the wolf demon, please!
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: July 03, 2015 21:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am so happy that Kagome is open to dating. She and Kouga would be
great together. Especially since Inuyasha isn't even sorry about
what he did to Kagome. The hell with him!
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: July 03, 2015 21:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, so Inuyasha really did have sex with Kikyo and Kagome saw it.
I was just hoping that Inuyasha and Kikyo were both naked and were
about to have sex.....sigh. Kouga is perfect for Kagome. I adore
this story, but please don't make Kagome a pushover who allows
Inuyasha to get away with disrespecting her. And a wolf demon who
is also in premed, and chivalrous would make a great sex partner.
Especially since it appears that Inuyasha has also had sex with the
receptionist who treated Kagome like crap.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: July 03, 2015 21:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is just disgusting!! Not to mention a fool!! How can he
not see that Kikyo is a gold digging whore with no morals?! She
wanted to have sex with a married man, AND contest a will that does
not concern her?! Hmmm, get a brain Inuyasha. As for Kagome, there
is such a thing as being too nice and passive. I hope she outs
Inuyasha, or takes his inheritance. I truly hope she does not give
Inuyasha her virginity. He is too dirty to deserve it, and not
because he is a hanyou, but because he is slime.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: July 03, 2015 21:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really hope this is a misunderstanding.
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Reviewed By: zellie15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2015 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! It's such a different inuyasha fanfic that I've read
in a while. I hope to read more!!
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Reviewed By: inulovergirl90 On: June 16, 2015 10:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really hope you didn't give up on this story! I love it. I don't
care what anyone says yes it might be similar to other storys but
hell people like this type of story. Please please update! Its nice
to find new inuyasha stories once in awhile especially since ive
been reading inu fan fics for atleast 10 years!
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Reviewed By: Booyaka On: May 28, 2015 07:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
This story is good but it seems to follow every other story of
arrogant promiscuous rich in some type of way Inuyasha and innocent
naive gullible Kagome who can't stand up for herself and gives in.
In this chapter she is slowly falling for him seemingly ignorant of
the fact that he is self absorbed and man-whorish. Her thoughts
toward the end of him not seeing her as anything other than
business deal or conquest attesting to her underlying desire to be
more to him. Again the story isn't bad, just overdone.
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Reviewed By: kyriamei On: May 21, 2015 05:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
the status said it is complete but it isnt... but i love the story,
please update..... looking forward... :)
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Reviewed By: inulovergirl90 On: May 16, 2015 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story please hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2015 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait to find out what exactly Kagome walked in
on. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 21:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Did she have to be a virgin? I hope she just wore the hood to
please her grandfather and nothing more.He doesn't deserve a pure
Kagome, after he has been with Kikyo, after they became engaged. If
she is ( so unfair) then I hope she looses it to anyone who isn't
Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 21:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
If he gives Kikyo a call, then Kagome should call up Kouga. If the
mutt can have a side piece so can Kagome, fair is fair. So why
isn't Kagome's father in debt? Shouldn't that moron be the one with
all the financial problems? Not his innocent family?
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 20:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
So is Kagome going to be a miko with powers in this story? She
needs them so she can sit Inuyasha whenever she wants.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 20:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
He is such a pig! I really hope he doesn't cheat on Kagome. And I
hope Kagome isn't a virgin either.
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