| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2016 17:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Fantastic story loved it from start to finish
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Title: Duplicate chapter
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2016 07:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
I think I've missed something. Chapter 31 and 32 are duplicates,
and there's been no explanation for why the phone call Inuyasha
ignored was important, nor why Kikyo has apparently been
institutionalized gor attempting suicide. Is this fic on another
site, where I could read the missing chapter?
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Title: Wonderful!!!!
Reviewed By: Vampiress213 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2016 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story,once I started reading, I didn't want to stop!!!!
Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!!!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: March 25, 2016 06:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww its over, while I am glad that a person writing a great story
on this site actually finished it, I'm gonna miss seeing the update
of the story. Its such a beautiful ending, haha makes me wanna get
married soon lol, though not to a jerk who turns into a nice guy...
but yeah this was a great story I love the way you write and I look
forward to your current story and future (hopefully) stories!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Renee930 On: February 29, 2016 13:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my god I can't wait for next
chapter!!!!!
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Title: always out do yourself
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: February 29, 2016 09:16 PST
Comment/Review:
My my, the last few chapters that I have read since the last time I
have reviewed have been so good, you pace the story line and
develop the relationship so well! Haha can't wait for the next
chapter since you left us with such a cliffhanger lol
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Reviewed By: Fallenangel7583 nsi On: February 28, 2016 11:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Great job thus ar. I've really enjoyed this au. The characters each
have their flaws but it's not too much to bear. You have great
dialogue that's realistic. Very good job! I'miss looking forward to
seeing their resolution.
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Reviewed By: Renee930 On: February 20, 2016 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, i can't thank you enough for continuing this story! I've
read so many amazing Inuyasha fanfics only to get to the latest
chapter and realize the author hasn't updated in like 4+ years. So
thank you for continuing this amazing story. Few grammatical errors
here and there but the content is amazing. I love where you're
going with this story and I especially love the character
development you show in inuyasha and kagome. Amazing thus far I
love this story! I'm anxiously awaiting to see how this story ends.
:)
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Title: soo addicted
Reviewed By: dealwithademonfan On: February 19, 2016 23:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there any way to rate the enjoyment factor higher than a 10?
Love the latest chapters! You're such a great author & I look
forward to your next story as well. Will it be a Inuyasha fanfic?
(I know your keeping it under wraps lol) I really enjoy reading
this fanfic & can't wait for more. I never want it to end lol
thanks for the 2 chapters in one day! What a treat!!
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2016 10:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad that they finally talked about everything. I
was excited to see that Inuyasha expressed not only his feelings,
but also laid his claim on Kagome. Plus, picking Kagome up from the
bar in his pajamas and running to get her, and giving Sango a thank
you and money to get home really gave him some brownie points with
Sango. While it was noble of Hojo to put up a fight for Kagome, he
needs to know that he wasn't even in the running for a long term
relationship with Kagome. Unless she settled for him, then that
would have been all bad.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: February 05, 2016 21:02 PST
Comment/Review:
I can finally review from a computer, instead of on a smartphone
which made me seem deranged, before. So Inuyasha is willing to tell
Kagome how he feels? What if Kikyo was in front of him, too? He
will just choose Kikyo again. Kagome really should go out and have
an active sex life. Or did both, she and Inuyasha forget that he
would go out and enjoy sex with other women?
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Reviewed By: Anticipating On: February 03, 2016 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I found it yesterday and haven't stopped
reading it since! I love the plot and how the characters have
developed, you're an amazing writer! Please keep updating this, I
can't wait to see how it ends :)
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Title: Omg new chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2016 23:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job. Poor inuyasha didnt have a chance to explain
to kagome. But plot thickens more. Keep up the great story.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:21 PST
Comment/Review:
What the hell?! What is Kilyo going to go? Slash her wrists again?
Let her.
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Reviewed By: Lafayette On: January 21, 2016 20:00 PST
Comment/Review:
Uggghhhh! What is Kikyo holding over his head??? I HAVE TO KNOW
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Reviewed By: random reviewer On: January 21, 2016 14:54 PST
Comment/Review:
I love the last two chapters! The last was so hot lol. I wonder
what's going to happen after this if it will be easy for Inuyasha
to convince Kagome that he really does care for.
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Title: So many updates lately
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2016 00:17 PST
Comment/Review:
Amazing work as always. Keeping readers on their toes with this
very orginal story plot. Loving the story if i haven't said it
already. How inuyasha had changed from a manwhore to a man worth
kagome's time. Seeing him shift over the storyline is gradual yet
soo staying with the character and a bit ooc but not too much.
Please keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: KrimsonLily On: January 19, 2016 22:17 PST
Comment/Review:
I feel like squealing like a little girl. Loved the chapter, shows
how their relationship is developing and how much their feelings
for one another has changed yet how they still haven't mentioned
anything to one another. I'm looking forward to seeing how
everything ends and other interactions between everybody. Keep up
the good work I always look forward to reading more of your
stories.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:38 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm relieved it was just Ayame, but incensed that Inuyasha brought
Ayame there to warm Kagome away from Kouga. Why is he allowed to go
to clubs and try to pick out a woman, but Kagome can't pursue a
relationship with anyone? So this is ending in ten chapters? How
are you going to fix the Kikyo problem? And in one of the earlier
chapters, wasn't there a woman at the club who was out to get
Inuyasha? She seemed like she would be a problem.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:32 PST
Comment/Review:
What the hell?! After his makeout session with Kagome, he still
went out to find willing pussy?!Twice?! Okay this is ridiculous,
please tell me that Kagome had a one night stand at the convention.
Why should she remain Pure for Inuyasha?! He is worse than scum.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:29 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh boy. Well at least this will stop Inuyasha from being a whore,
so yay!
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Exactly what did he and Kikyo do to pass the time? Was he being a
pig again?
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Title: yaay you're whipping them out
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: January 11, 2016 13:33 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I'm glad Inuyasha realized that Kagome was the only
one for him, and that he didn't betray her right before he got the
goods, I hope whoever called Inuyasha's name is just a platonic
friend and or family member and not kikyo lol that would suck for
everyone involved
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Title: love, love love it!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2016 03:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating this story & for not wanting to
rush the romance or the ending. I truly appreciate that. This is
Def one of my top fav fanfics of 2015/2016! I love the character
development & their pov's & of course all of the Drama aka
sexual tension. You're a wonderful author & I look forward to
reading more of your work.
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Inukag4eva luv On: January 09, 2016 10:40 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! I love this story so much; it just keeps
getting better and better. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to
see what happens in the next chapter to come!
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Title: oh snap
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: January 08, 2016 07:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Glad Inuyasha and kagome hit this mile stone, though I hope
Inuyasha has to wait longer for it, whilst getting teased haha,
great chapter keep it up!
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Title: Seen the new chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2016 04:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello its your fan deathlord86 again. Your story has stolen my
attention once again. Love it. Kagome actually admitted liking
inuyasha??? The horndog and the student...plot gets better in every
chapter. Please keep doing the great work.
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