| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 21:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha is unfaithful. I would be okay with that since their
marriage is just an arrangement, except so far Kagome is still a
virgin. I don't want her to give her virginity to that dirty
asshole. I want her to have a boyfriend who cares for her, and
looses it to him. Inuyasha should not be her first.
|
Title: love this story
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2015 00:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Started reading when you started this amazing fanfiction. The
characters are well played out in the story. Inuyasha is falling
hard for kagome but not instant love but over time. Getting to know
eachother. Very orginal, please keep up the great work. New chapter
and not making me anxious while waiting.
|
Title: finally
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: October 19, 2015 18:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
So glad you updated! Can't wait til nex chapter, scared to know
what happens next!
|
Title: Omg love the story
Reviewed By: Ladylove86 On: September 08, 2015 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please keep up the good work
|
Reviewed By: Alejandra243 On: September 07, 2015 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!!! I was so excited I had two chapters waiting for me. Chapter
...25? Was so amazing to me. I was like, yes this is it! His big
turn around. He's going to see what an amazing person Kagome is and
realize he's been wasting time on those hood rats and start being a
better "husband." Kagome will start to see the change, they fall
madly in love blah blah blah. But then I click next chapter and you
torpedoed all my dreams, haha. That damn dog!!! Ugh! He just can't
keep in his pants! And I have a pretty good feeling Shippo is going
to turn out to be an 8 yr old. So he did all that damage for
nothing! She is too good for him. I don't even care at this point.
I just want her to complete all her dreams. Become a doctor and
take off saving lives. Leave inuyasha in the dust. He deserves it.
I mean I know it's not cheating. I know that. But my heart doesn't!
Keep up the good work! I'm so obsessed with this story.
|
Title: awesome sauce
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: September 03, 2015 13:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it, the story has been good from start to finish, and even
seems to be getting better as chapters go on!
|
Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Deadpool-girl On: August 17, 2015 07:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved the new chapter and all the ones before it,
please update soon. It is such a wonder to read and I am brimming
in anticipation for some InuKag action.
|
Reviewed By: alejandra243 On: August 16, 2015 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so in love with your portrayal of these characters. Kagome
doesn't see what's so great about inuyasha and she's right. Oh,
he's so rich-so what. She's an honest to goodness nice person. Too
good for that dog boy as he is now. And even though I'm in love
with her stance and not falling for him, I really wanted them to
kiss. I know I know. It goes against everything I just said. But
gosh darn that sexually tension! I like mostly one shots because 1.
They story is complete and 2. I get the characters in bed faster.
So I'm going to be hoping for the ending sooner than later but you
take your sweet time! Ignore my demands of "Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!"
You're doing awesome.
|
Reviewed By: alejandra243 On: July 30, 2015 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see other reviewers feel the same way I do! I like your
story very much. I like how kagome is cool with inuyasha doing what
he pleases, like it doesn't affect her. And it shouldn't as he's
done nothing but have sex with other women. I'm all for inu/kag
pairings, but I wouldn't be mad to see Kouga get some love first.
Inuyasha is such a jerk. I'm sure some big break through is coming,
but id wish he stop his womanizing ways to make it seem like he
means it. And why does he like kikyou so much? Ugh. Kagome can't
even go on a date but you can bang her look alike, get caught by
Kagome, bang a bunch of other chicks and it's totally cool.....This
may seem like a negative review but it's not! Im just venting about
that bad dog demon!
|
Reviewed By: Kai83 On: July 29, 2015 09:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Since your chapters are really short, you should update faster. Or
rather make it longer if you won't update regularly
|
Reviewed By: zellie On: July 29, 2015 00:33 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you continue to post new chapters, I'm a big fan of this
story. Keep the chapters coming, I can't wait to read them :)
|
Reviewed By: Kai83 On: July 20, 2015 00:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Uh oh! Both of them are playing a dangerous game and it's only in a
matter of time before one of them breaks and I get it'll be
inuyasha if only he would get his head out of his ass
|
Reviewed By: Kai83 On: July 18, 2015 12:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love your portrayal of kagome, she's feisty, knows her mind and
doesn't let anyone walk over her. I like how she puts inuyasha in
his place. Pls update immediately. Looking forward to this story's
progress
|
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: July 13, 2015 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your story since the beginning and it's
definitely on my top reads right now, hope you continue the great
work!
|
Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: July 03, 2015 21:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Is Kagome a miko? I would love to see her fry Inuyasha.He is so
unworthy of her.
|
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
