| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Title: yaay you're whipping them out
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: January 11, 2016 13:33 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I'm glad Inuyasha realized that Kagome was the only
one for him, and that he didn't betray her right before he got the
goods, I hope whoever called Inuyasha's name is just a platonic
friend and or family member and not kikyo lol that would suck for
everyone involved
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Title: love, love love it!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2016 03:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating this story & for not wanting to
rush the romance or the ending. I truly appreciate that. This is
Def one of my top fav fanfics of 2015/2016! I love the character
development & their pov's & of course all of the Drama aka
sexual tension. You're a wonderful author & I look forward to
reading more of your work.
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Inukag4eva luv On: January 09, 2016 10:40 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! I love this story so much; it just keeps
getting better and better. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to
see what happens in the next chapter to come!
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Title: oh snap
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: January 08, 2016 07:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Glad Inuyasha and kagome hit this mile stone, though I hope
Inuyasha has to wait longer for it, whilst getting teased haha,
great chapter keep it up!
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Title: Seen the new chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2016 04:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello its your fan deathlord86 again. Your story has stolen my
attention once again. Love it. Kagome actually admitted liking
inuyasha??? The horndog and the student...plot gets better in every
chapter. Please keep doing the great work.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: December 31, 2015 23:39 PST
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha has no obligation to Kikyo. She harmed herself all on her
own to get his attention. I feel sorry for Hojo, but he's too
vanilla. Are you really going to make Kagome inexperienced until
she hooks up with Inuyasha? That's just not fair.
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Reviewed By: Inukaglovewoo On: December 30, 2015 09:33 PST
Comment/Review:
Please please update soon! I ove this fanfic
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Title: Great update!
Reviewed By: imlovinit On: December 09, 2015 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for uploading a new chapter. Though the most recent one got
uploaded twice it doesn't change the fact that this is one of the
best Inuyasha fanfics out there. The plot,drama,sexual tension
& pov's really draw me in. I can't wait for more. Your doing an
awesome job & are truly a great author.
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Title: Great update!
Reviewed By: imlovinit On: December 09, 2015 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for uploading a new chapter. Though the most recent one got
uploaded twice it doesn't change the fact that this is one of the
best Inuyasha fanfics out there. The plot,drama,sexual tension
& pov's really draw me in. I can't wait for more. Your doing an
awesome job & are truly a great author.
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Title: Dang getting me caught up in every chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2015 22:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always do great original plot. Oh my goodness that very plot is
an attention grabber. Thus far you are doing good. About same love
triangle as anime and manga along with a twist to keep readers on
their toes. My only request is more updates more often but I can
always wait if the chapter is good. Inuyasha is getting possessive
over kagome. Seems hojo could get his butt kicked if he hurt
kagome. Please keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, now I'm nervous, and if it is what I think it is, I hope
Kagome hooks up with Seshomaru!!! He's just so yum. And let's face
it, Inuyasha deserves some pain.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha really is disgusting. Did he think Kagome would welcome
him sexually after he had sex with so many women?! Why wasn't his
demon forcing him to be faithful?! I'm sure all the demons in
attendance will smell the whores on Inuyasha. What a way to
disrespect Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love your writing talent, I truly do. But after this little stunt
Inuyasha pulled.......please just please tell me that Kagome will
finally have a couple of one night stands.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
a restraining order on Kikyo is in order. She is just psycho. At
least Inuyasha realized that Kikyo was disrespecting Kagome's home.
I did hate that virgin crack, and I want Kagome to do something
about that, just not with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: October 23, 2015 22:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
Who the hell does Kikyo think she is to show up at Kagome's home?!
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