| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: February 05, 2016 21:02 PST
Comment/Review:
I can finally review from a computer, instead of on a smartphone
which made me seem deranged, before. So Inuyasha is willing to tell
Kagome how he feels? What if Kikyo was in front of him, too? He
will just choose Kikyo again. Kagome really should go out and have
an active sex life. Or did both, she and Inuyasha forget that he
would go out and enjoy sex with other women?
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Reviewed By: Anticipating On: February 03, 2016 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I found it yesterday and haven't stopped
reading it since! I love the plot and how the characters have
developed, you're an amazing writer! Please keep updating this, I
can't wait to see how it ends :)
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Title: Omg new chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2016 23:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job. Poor inuyasha didnt have a chance to explain
to kagome. But plot thickens more. Keep up the great story.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:21 PST
Comment/Review:
What the hell?! What is Kilyo going to go? Slash her wrists again?
Let her.
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Reviewed By: Lafayette On: January 21, 2016 20:00 PST
Comment/Review:
Uggghhhh! What is Kikyo holding over his head??? I HAVE TO KNOW
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Reviewed By: random reviewer On: January 21, 2016 14:54 PST
Comment/Review:
I love the last two chapters! The last was so hot lol. I wonder
what's going to happen after this if it will be easy for Inuyasha
to convince Kagome that he really does care for.
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Title: So many updates lately
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2016 00:17 PST
Comment/Review:
Amazing work as always. Keeping readers on their toes with this
very orginal story plot. Loving the story if i haven't said it
already. How inuyasha had changed from a manwhore to a man worth
kagome's time. Seeing him shift over the storyline is gradual yet
soo staying with the character and a bit ooc but not too much.
Please keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: KrimsonLily On: January 19, 2016 22:17 PST
Comment/Review:
I feel like squealing like a little girl. Loved the chapter, shows
how their relationship is developing and how much their feelings
for one another has changed yet how they still haven't mentioned
anything to one another. I'm looking forward to seeing how
everything ends and other interactions between everybody. Keep up
the good work I always look forward to reading more of your
stories.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:38 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm relieved it was just Ayame, but incensed that Inuyasha brought
Ayame there to warm Kagome away from Kouga. Why is he allowed to go
to clubs and try to pick out a woman, but Kagome can't pursue a
relationship with anyone? So this is ending in ten chapters? How
are you going to fix the Kikyo problem? And in one of the earlier
chapters, wasn't there a woman at the club who was out to get
Inuyasha? She seemed like she would be a problem.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:32 PST
Comment/Review:
What the hell?! After his makeout session with Kagome, he still
went out to find willing pussy?!Twice?! Okay this is ridiculous,
please tell me that Kagome had a one night stand at the convention.
Why should she remain Pure for Inuyasha?! He is worse than scum.
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:29 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh boy. Well at least this will stop Inuyasha from being a whore,
so yay!
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Reviewed By: Leellu On: January 17, 2016 21:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Exactly what did he and Kikyo do to pass the time? Was he being a
pig again?
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