| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2016 17:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Fantastic story loved it from start to finish
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Title: Duplicate chapter
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2016 07:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
I think I've missed something. Chapter 31 and 32 are duplicates,
and there's been no explanation for why the phone call Inuyasha
ignored was important, nor why Kikyo has apparently been
institutionalized gor attempting suicide. Is this fic on another
site, where I could read the missing chapter?
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Title: Wonderful!!!!
Reviewed By: Vampiress213 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2016 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story,once I started reading, I didn't want to stop!!!!
Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!!!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: March 25, 2016 06:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww its over, while I am glad that a person writing a great story
on this site actually finished it, I'm gonna miss seeing the update
of the story. Its such a beautiful ending, haha makes me wanna get
married soon lol, though not to a jerk who turns into a nice guy...
but yeah this was a great story I love the way you write and I look
forward to your current story and future (hopefully) stories!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Renee930 On: February 29, 2016 13:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my god I can't wait for next
chapter!!!!!
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Title: always out do yourself
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: February 29, 2016 09:16 PST
Comment/Review:
My my, the last few chapters that I have read since the last time I
have reviewed have been so good, you pace the story line and
develop the relationship so well! Haha can't wait for the next
chapter since you left us with such a cliffhanger lol
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Reviewed By: Fallenangel7583 nsi On: February 28, 2016 11:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Great job thus ar. I've really enjoyed this au. The characters each
have their flaws but it's not too much to bear. You have great
dialogue that's realistic. Very good job! I'miss looking forward to
seeing their resolution.
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Reviewed By: Renee930 On: February 20, 2016 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, i can't thank you enough for continuing this story! I've
read so many amazing Inuyasha fanfics only to get to the latest
chapter and realize the author hasn't updated in like 4+ years. So
thank you for continuing this amazing story. Few grammatical errors
here and there but the content is amazing. I love where you're
going with this story and I especially love the character
development you show in inuyasha and kagome. Amazing thus far I
love this story! I'm anxiously awaiting to see how this story ends.
:)
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Title: soo addicted
Reviewed By: dealwithademonfan On: February 19, 2016 23:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there any way to rate the enjoyment factor higher than a 10?
Love the latest chapters! You're such a great author & I look
forward to your next story as well. Will it be a Inuyasha fanfic?
(I know your keeping it under wraps lol) I really enjoy reading
this fanfic & can't wait for more. I never want it to end lol
thanks for the 2 chapters in one day! What a treat!!
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2016 10:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad that they finally talked about everything. I
was excited to see that Inuyasha expressed not only his feelings,
but also laid his claim on Kagome. Plus, picking Kagome up from the
bar in his pajamas and running to get her, and giving Sango a thank
you and money to get home really gave him some brownie points with
Sango. While it was noble of Hojo to put up a fight for Kagome, he
needs to know that he wasn't even in the running for a long term
relationship with Kagome. Unless she settled for him, then that
would have been all bad.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: February 05, 2016 21:02 PST
Comment/Review:
I can finally review from a computer, instead of on a smartphone
which made me seem deranged, before. So Inuyasha is willing to tell
Kagome how he feels? What if Kikyo was in front of him, too? He
will just choose Kikyo again. Kagome really should go out and have
an active sex life. Or did both, she and Inuyasha forget that he
would go out and enjoy sex with other women?
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Reviewed By: Anticipating On: February 03, 2016 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I found it yesterday and haven't stopped
reading it since! I love the plot and how the characters have
developed, you're an amazing writer! Please keep updating this, I
can't wait to see how it ends :)
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Title: Omg new chapter
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2016 23:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job. Poor inuyasha didnt have a chance to explain
to kagome. But plot thickens more. Keep up the great story.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 30, 2016 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
I was sort of hoping that she would be gone for theirs toon of the
contract. So, now can she haves ex with another guy?
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