| "The Wandering Maiden" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: celestialmoonstars [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this was super! its really different to all the other fan fics i've read. I hope that you will continue with it. I want to find out what happens next. An absolute joy to read. |
Reviewed By: Xenotra [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this, I like the narrative feel. If you want some criticism, though, maybe this's on purpose, but some sentences are present tense and some are past. I only really noticed it in the beginning, after that I got sucked into the storyline and didn't care. I can't give you an originality rating cuz I've never SEEN Fuushigi Tuugi |
Reviewed By: Xenotra [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
It'd better be, I mean, sheesh...just kidding of course, good start, on to the next chap! |
