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Reviewed By: Otacon On: January 07, 2003 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Sweet!!! Pleacs keep the story going |
Reviewed By: LilShampoo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 23:07 CDT
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uh...... i liked the story but the ending was kinda off.....i guess, but i likes it all the same. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau On: September 17, 2002 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil computer wont let log on just yet. Well great chapter and hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: LilShampoo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 20:39 CDT
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heeeehe that was cute ^-^ i liked the paret about tori and naruku werein teh bathroom ^-^ i hope you keep writing this stori i love it!
shampoo |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 17:41 CDT
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Great chap! Gee wonder who this mysterious person is...hmmm. Oh well just have to find out. |
Reviewed By: Soni On: August 28, 2002 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Syaoran and Meiling are introduced soon. |
Reviewed By: Chickie Cherry ChipChip On: August 26, 2002 14:14 CDT
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Chickie Cherry ChipChip says, CHICKYTASTIC!!! |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 26, 2002 14:09 CDT
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Wow |
Reviewed By: LilShampoo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 12:03 CDT
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koo i lilked that chapter ^.^ *wispers to kay* that jason person seams rely kool! *yells to kero* your welcome for the cake! keep up the good work kay! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 08:13 CDT
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I think you are going to need a better lock on that door. Or you could change the lock and only make 1 key for it. Great chapter. Yes 5 more dollars at this rate I will be rich!!! |
Reviewed By: Soni On: August 23, 2002 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!
I hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Soni On: August 23, 2002 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!
I hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: LilShampoo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 01:50 CDT
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kawaii ^.^ that was a cute chapter *sneaks kero a peice of cake* shhhhhhhhh WHO IS THIS PERSON MADISON IS TALKIN ABOUT! *paces the room* i need to know! O.O |
Reviewed By: DragonNeck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT START! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 09:00 CDT
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cute chapter. Keep going!! I bet 5 dollars says you hit him before he eats cake again. |
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