| "Sailor Moon Online: Shadow of Aincrad" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2015 14:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. You made some spelling errors &
misspelled Juniper & Jinchuriki a few times & misspelled
cord as card but the chapter is otherwise good as far as I can
read.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2015 16:26 PST
Comment/Review:
You've written another good addition to this story
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2015 08:05 PST
Comment/Review:
You've written another good chapter & addition to this story. I
wonder who those cloaked figures are & what they are planning.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2015 06:27 PST
Comment/Review:
You've written another good chapter to add to this story.
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2015 06:47 PST
Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter. I just noticed it's now possible to post
Facebook comments on the chapter pages so you may want to start
looking there as well.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2015 06:41 PST
Comment/Review:
You've written another great chapter. Have you given any thought to
my suggestion from my November 07 review?
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Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2015 08:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter.
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Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2015 21:37 PST
Comment/Review:
A good chapter as usual. I saw a few errors in spelling &
grammar but didn't stop to note where they were. I would also like
to suggest considering posting your stories on Archive Of Our Own.
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