| "Kyoto Epilogue" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story was dealious.
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Title: Sapadu
Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both of them were very much in character, and the story was wonderful. Go, you!
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Reviewed By: Mura chan On: January 03, 2004 15:01 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really NICE. You should write more YNM fics.
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol. ^-^ This is a nice epilogue. Quite cute and catchy. I guess I like Tatsumi and Watari's conversation about matchmaking ^_^ especially when it's about the tea. I drank ginseng a lot of times and I never really noticed that it has some effects and such @_@ I should go ask my mom. I always thought it's for the health.
I love the fic ^-^ I wish that YnM has a epilogue like this or something. The part where they are sharing the bath tub... ::hearts:: Quite passionate.
Great work!!! |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 01:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Great fic! The anime was in definite need of an epilogue. Thanks for the treat! |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: January 13, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was absolutely lovely! and one of the most well written yaoi love scenes *ever*! It was so tasteful :D and sweet.
please write more! we need more good fics like this! ^_^
(in response to your last review.... *how* could you get BORED reading this???? unless you aren't much of a shounen-ai fan...i know my brother isn't and he likes heavy plot stuff more than character development/interaction. but still.) |
Reviewed By: Requiem Duindain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, no doubt about it but... you could add so much more. It's not an insult, it's just a piece of advice. After a while the readers could get bored... Try harder next time and put a bit more deep meaning into your fanfics. By the way, loved Kamui's Unusual Morning! |
Reviewed By: Akari On: September 25, 2002 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Fic!
And I loved how Tsuzuki managed to relate everythign to food.
Great job! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: angelchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! A Tsuzuki/Hisoka fic! *dances* And set after my favourite arc too! *glomps Mac-san to dance as well* I think you've done a wonderful job with characterization; really, Tsu-chan and Soka-chan seem to be dead on from how they are in the anime and what I've read of the manga. Some of the Tsuzuki/Hisoka fics I've read sound very forced putting the two of them together, odd because they're practically canon in the series, but this isn't true in your writing; it seems very natural and it flows very well. *looks around and whispers* And hot yaoi sex that got me all bothered - in the good!! *puts Mac-san down and stops dancing* Anyway, a wonderfully written fic! Great job! Hope to see more Yami fics from you! |
