| "Palm of Your Hand" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 20:58 PST
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I will, I will have a cow!!! What the hell?! Dammit Kagome, all you
have to do is wait minutes, minutes!!!!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 20:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Dammit Inuyasha! You should have said it was you! And dammit mama
Higurashi! Don't lie!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 20:36 PST
Comment/Review:
Could Ru be Seshoumaru's son? He better not be Inuyasha's son!
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Reviewed By: WatersEdge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2016 10:53 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Chapter 11... I had to read it twice, that was intense and for
a second I wished I was Kagome. Good job! I can't wait for the next
chapter! ^___^
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Reviewed By: CrimsonLily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2016 22:11 PST
Comment/Review:
You left it right there!? That's soo mean. I always enjoy reading
the new chapters when they come out. Sometimes I wish there was
more than one to read at once. Keep it up, I look forward to seeing
where the story is going.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonLily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2015 11:45 PST
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The story sounds good so far. Seems like there's room for lots of
development and different ways that the story could go. Despite the
fact that the first two chapters are pretty much introductory,
you've done a good job of still keeping it interesting. Hope you
continue to update and write other stories too.
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