| "Palm of Your Hand" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2016 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I've been monitoring your progress posting this
one for a while, and was ecstatic when I saw the note in your
profile about it already being completed. I decided then to just
wait it out so I could read the whole thing in one sitting, which
is what I just did! I had no idea what it was even going to be
about until I started. For some reason, I'd been expecting a Feudal
era fic that balanced Inuyasha's budding relationship with Kagome
along with the defeat of Naraku and all that jazz. I was actually
glad, though, when I realized it was a post-manga, 'the well stayed
sealed and he meets her again after 500 years' themed fic. I've got
a soft spot for those. It's pretty hard in this day and age to come
up with fully original ideas, but you had several unique tweaks in
this bad boy that made reading it refreshing and enjoyable. Good
job!
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Title: Great story! Can't wait to hear more. :}.
Reviewed By: Ggluvertz2765. On: April 03, 2016 03:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous. Love it completely and can't wait for the next 2 chapters
too! Can't wait!!! So excited, again. I love it, :}.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: March 29, 2016 20:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
It galls me that Inuyasha is so insecure about Kagome and his
nephew. He is the one who went off and willingly had children with
another woman. Yes, I said willingly. He could have smelled that
the Twins' mother was fertile. And yet he makes Kagome feel bad
about her relationship with Ru? He has no right. Does the name
Kikyo ring a bell? He constantly put Kagome through hell, still is.
He is not worthy of Kagome. I wish she did have Ru's child before
she ever remet Inuyasha. Inuyasha never fought for Kagome, ever.
When he found out she was living with another guy he never bothered
to check if it was just a roommate, and what about when Kagome came
back from the well for the final time?! He knew she would be
devastated but he chose to ignore that. This Inuyasha is a selfish
spoiled dog. I wish Kagome and Ru would get together.
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Reviewed By: Fallenangel7583 nsi On: March 23, 2016 05:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
Agh! Now that's a cliff hanger. I'm guessing that Inu can sense her
panic and shows up to save the day. That, or we have quite the
dramatic ending. Either way, great updates. Love the ring; it's
super romantic that he knew he'd find her again.
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Title: come on
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: March 22, 2016 06:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Man that cliffhanger is brutal, I seriously want to know whats
going to happen next... its all been so good so far
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2016 17:41 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad that Inuyasha, Kagome, and Ru finally got to the bottom of
things.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2016 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! Great job in character building. I love Ru; he
is, by far, the best oc that I've seen in a long time. Fantastic
job creating his character. I figured it out by chapter two who he
was, but it flowed wonderfully. I am happy to see inu and Kagome
together. Wonderful job! Can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: KAItoitachi On: February 08, 2016 18:17 PST
Comment/Review:
I can't believe that I would be reading a part where Kagome
disappointed me to the point of hating her. She's got so much
issues in her life that instead of facing them, she just tends to
run away from it all. I have a feeling that she's in love with Ru
and she's just in denial. To have Inuyasha giving up a lot for her
only to be gob smacked in the face that the girl you have waited
for a long time fell in love with somebody else. I hope that she
will experience what it is like to lose Inuyasha and I meant that
his heart no longer beats for her.
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Title: ohh drama
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: February 08, 2016 17:33 PST
Comment/Review:
This was a very good chapter. I like they even though by argument,
were able to scratch the surface of important matters in their
lives. I feel like its slightly annoying that Inuyasha would have
to pack his bags and stay with Kagome when shes got less things
going for her haha, but then again sonce Inuyasha has lived a long
life maybe its not that big a deal to do something different.. I
just hope it won't take them to much heartache to get to paradise!
Update soon!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: February 04, 2016 08:44 PST
Comment/Review:
Glad I'm finally able to comment. Love this story and the way you
direct it haha, glad that they were able to get to the point and
not wait or confuse their relationship. Can't wait to see what Ru
says
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2016 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story so far. Kagome has really changed since the well
stopped as well as Inuyasha. He's definitely matured. Ru is a fun
character and I would like to see more of him and his interaction
with the Inu Pack and Kagome. Will Sesshomaru come in to his son's
life on the other side of the world?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Now I'm glad Kagome isn't a virgin. How could Inuyasha not keep
himself pure for Kagome! He cheated on her!!! Hasn't he ever heard
of masturbating?! I hope he doesn't have any kids.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:35 PST
Comment/Review:
With the Ru in Inuyasha's mouth comment and the no soup disaster, I
could barely stop laughing.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:23 PST
Comment/Review:
Well I laughed. Though maybe that's inappropriate, since it was at
the expense of your death?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Either it went over my head or I blocked it out, but was Kagome a
virgin?!
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