| "Palm of Your Hand" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2016 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! Great job in character building. I love Ru; he
is, by far, the best oc that I've seen in a long time. Fantastic
job creating his character. I figured it out by chapter two who he
was, but it flowed wonderfully. I am happy to see inu and Kagome
together. Wonderful job! Can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: KAItoitachi On: February 08, 2016 18:17 PST
Comment/Review:
I can't believe that I would be reading a part where Kagome
disappointed me to the point of hating her. She's got so much
issues in her life that instead of facing them, she just tends to
run away from it all. I have a feeling that she's in love with Ru
and she's just in denial. To have Inuyasha giving up a lot for her
only to be gob smacked in the face that the girl you have waited
for a long time fell in love with somebody else. I hope that she
will experience what it is like to lose Inuyasha and I meant that
his heart no longer beats for her.
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Title: ohh drama
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: February 08, 2016 17:33 PST
Comment/Review:
This was a very good chapter. I like they even though by argument,
were able to scratch the surface of important matters in their
lives. I feel like its slightly annoying that Inuyasha would have
to pack his bags and stay with Kagome when shes got less things
going for her haha, but then again sonce Inuyasha has lived a long
life maybe its not that big a deal to do something different.. I
just hope it won't take them to much heartache to get to paradise!
Update soon!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: February 04, 2016 08:44 PST
Comment/Review:
Glad I'm finally able to comment. Love this story and the way you
direct it haha, glad that they were able to get to the point and
not wait or confuse their relationship. Can't wait to see what Ru
says
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2016 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story so far. Kagome has really changed since the well
stopped as well as Inuyasha. He's definitely matured. Ru is a fun
character and I would like to see more of him and his interaction
with the Inu Pack and Kagome. Will Sesshomaru come in to his son's
life on the other side of the world?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Now I'm glad Kagome isn't a virgin. How could Inuyasha not keep
himself pure for Kagome! He cheated on her!!! Hasn't he ever heard
of masturbating?! I hope he doesn't have any kids.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:35 PST
Comment/Review:
With the Ru in Inuyasha's mouth comment and the no soup disaster, I
could barely stop laughing.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:23 PST
Comment/Review:
Well I laughed. Though maybe that's inappropriate, since it was at
the expense of your death?
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 21:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Either it went over my head or I blocked it out, but was Kagome a
virgin?!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 20:58 PST
Comment/Review:
I will, I will have a cow!!! What the hell?! Dammit Kagome, all you
have to do is wait minutes, minutes!!!!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 20:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Dammit Inuyasha! You should have said it was you! And dammit mama
Higurashi! Don't lie!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 27, 2016 20:36 PST
Comment/Review:
Could Ru be Seshoumaru's son? He better not be Inuyasha's son!
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Reviewed By: WatersEdge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2016 10:53 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Chapter 11... I had to read it twice, that was intense and for
a second I wished I was Kagome. Good job! I can't wait for the next
chapter! ^___^
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Reviewed By: CrimsonLily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2016 22:11 PST
Comment/Review:
You left it right there!? That's soo mean. I always enjoy reading
the new chapters when they come out. Sometimes I wish there was
more than one to read at once. Keep it up, I look forward to seeing
where the story is going.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonLily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2015 11:45 PST
Comment/Review:
The story sounds good so far. Seems like there's room for lots of
development and different ways that the story could go. Despite the
fact that the first two chapters are pretty much introductory,
you've done a good job of still keeping it interesting. Hope you
continue to update and write other stories too.
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