| "Can't Stay Away" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaiitachi On: February 13, 2016 17:57 PST
Comment/Review:
So kagome surrendered and she got nothing in return. She will not
have any leverage when she gets discarded again. How stupid
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Reviewed By: Kaiitachi On: February 13, 2016 17:54 PST
Comment/Review:
So kagome surrendered and she got nothing in return. She will not
have any leverage when she gets discarded again. How stupid
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Reviewed By: Whirling eyes On: February 08, 2016 19:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh hell no!!! He got a blow job from Yura, but Kagome is supposed
to stay a virgin?! Please tell me that she and Kouga will have sex,
or at least oral sex. It's not fair that Inutrasha can get some,
but Kagome can't.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: JessicaM On: February 08, 2016 01:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has been a while since i see this kind of fanfic :D so glad to
see someone still making a fun and smutty inukag fanfic with great
storyline and content. Keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: whirling eyes On: February 05, 2016 20:26 PST
Comment/Review:
What the?! This has Kikyo written all over it. As a demon he could
have smelt the deceit on Kagome if she lied. I am glad she never
slept with him!She deserves better.
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Title: deathlord86
Reviewed By: InuYume88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2016 16:33 PST
Comment/Review:
Hi, deathlord86! Sorry for the mess, but I still can't figure out
what happens when I post the chapters. They are formatted and they
look fine on FFN, but most of the times here they look like that.
I'll try to fix it again next time, sorry!
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Title: I like the story
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2016 23:40 PST
Comment/Review:
Could you put spaces between the paragraphs and everyone
talking/thinking. Kinda hard to read
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Reviewed By: Whirling eyes On: January 27, 2016 17:16 PST
Comment/Review:
Really?! He can't trust females?! What about what he did to Kagome?
Where's the trust there? He went out with another woman and wanted
to have sex with her, and he hid that from Kagome! How can Kagome
say she trusts him? He has already lied to her and cheated on her.
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Reviewed By: whirling eyes On: January 27, 2016 17:09 PST
Comment/Review:
I am so mad at Inuyasha and Miroku!! Instead of trying to see what
he and Kagome could develop, he chose to have sex with Yura
instead! I don't care that he couldn't get it up! He went on a date
with her and they both got naked. He wanted to have sex with Yura
and he knew what he was doing was foul. Otherwise he wouldn't have
hidden it from Kagome. I hope she has sex with Kouga in
retaliation.
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 24, 2016 11:34 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm pissed off that Inuysha didn't break up with Kikyo. She was the
one to break up with him!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: January 24, 2016 11:31 PST
Comment/Review:
He has to dump Kikyo!!
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