Reviewed By: Masamune On: April 04, 2003 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, makes sense with this pairing. I'd like to see a bit more on this, since this is a path the game can go. What if Aeris didn't just visit Cloud in his mind, when she departed to the City of the Ancients. And who tended to Aeris when Cloud beat her uncontrolable at the Temple of the Ancients? The story can continue for a bit, if your following with the storyline and its not an Alter Universe like most.
I think the ratings make sense, your style is good, the spelling good, its fairly original and creative in the way it happened, where in others Aeris or Tifa just grabs the other and gets it on where its just a cheesy lemon. And of course, I enjoyed it. I hope to see more, rather than see this be the end. |
