Title: Chapter 3 Reviewed By:hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2016 06:56 PST Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I didn't stop any glaring errors in grammar
or typos like in chapter 1.
Reviewed By:hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2016 19:11 PST Comment/Review:
Good 1st chapter but you accidentally typed that Xexeed hadn't
eaten in 2 years which I'm certain is a typo since there's no
record I could find after a quick search of anyone surviving near
that long with just water. There might be other errors but that's
the only 1 I saw since I wasn't looking too closely.