| "Payment Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: riran On: September 30, 2016 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so much!!! And I also like domineering Inuyasha.
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Title: Holy SHIT!!
Reviewed By: Maximumfan On: August 17, 2016 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Title says it all.
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Reviewed By: WatersEdge [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2016 04:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The other reviews took the words right out of my mouth! Still, I
wanted to leave a little something to encourage you to keep writing
^-^ I LOVE this version of InuYasha and I hope to read more from
you in the future!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2016 16:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
I have three words for you, exhilarating, arousing and amazing.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2016 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome! Great job! I do think it stands alone quite well
as a one-shot, but I would definitely be into reading more if you
decided to create a second chapter. A sequel that takes us further
along in their relationship and maybe reveals just what that
"mystery" emotion is - like we don't already know they're
completely in love with each other - while also delving more into
their backstories, although I do think you sprinkled in enough plot
to have us figuring out the gist of it. It was the perfect
porn-with-hint-of-plot. Well done!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: April 02, 2016 09:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah the story was executed awesomely and I would def be interested
in the back drop... hopefully you will do more stories!? Also yeah
I like domineering Inuyasha as well!
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Reviewed By: Starlia On: April 01, 2016 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! I want more! I'm writing this from a phone, which I hate to
do, so believe me, this was good, more than good, it was great!
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